My literacy group are taking part of Get NZ writing and
we are writing poems based on william carlos williams
poem this is just to say:
Have you ever done anything naughty? be honest!
Monday, March 2, 2020
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My literacy group are taking part of Get NZ writing and
we are writing poems based on william carlos williams
poem this is just to say:
Have you ever done anything naughty? be honest!
My literacy group are taking part of Get NZ writing and
we are writing poems based on william carlos williams
poem this is just to say:
Have you ever done anything naughty? be honest!
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Hi Shelby, I'm Sam, I think that your poem reminds me of Johny Johny, quite mischievous and chuckle worth. Maybe next time you could try changing words to more interesting words. Like, perhaps, change yummy to divine
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